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I want to dig my teeth into your skin
I want to make you squirm in painful delight
I want you to overpower me and prove false anger onto my body
I want you to enjoy this unnatural sin.

I want to close my eyes and be surprised by the scratches left on my skin
I want to scream in pain and ecstasy
I long for your painful touch
I long for your bruising lips.

I long for the fleeting heart
known only from pain and submission
I long for the curling back and toes and tongue
known only from complete overtaken.

unnatural lusts
pleasurable pain
domination
submission
a world of reds blacks blues yellows
blood bruises dirt tears and screams
a world only of lust
a world only of pleasure
a world of backward loves
a world of paining the one you love.
A world of doing that which is desirable to your lust partner
your love partner
doing that which is painful, because they love it.


11/22/04
©2005-2009 ~wazooligan
:iconwazooligan:

Author's Comments

I call this a ramble. My rambles end up resembling poems or essays....this one resembles a poem. If I call something a ramble that means that it was written quickly and with a lot of momentary emotion.
This poem oughtta make it clear that I'm into sadism&masochism(S&M).

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:iconiasumonecara:
:zones back in: I really like this... and "a ramble" describes a lot of my work, too, then. You unfortunately make me crave my gf.... :rubs neck: I'll miss that in these three days I do not see her.. I love the emotion in this piece, it really comes out nicely. VN.

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Let no pain be uneased, no burden held alone.

In memory,
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:iconcrky42:
Very well done, one of your Best works..lol
There are no words for your decire for a Lusty partner huh? lol
:iconwazooligan:
Hey....thanks for actually looking at my work(actually...it's much more like play...I write when I am not "working" on something). I think I wrote this when I was thinking about my gf and how I need to convince her that I actually DO like pain and that it's more than ok to "hurt" me....

I'll go take a gander at your stuff now....even though I'm supposed to be "working"....
:iconiasumonecara:
hehe... gf is learning we both like it in an odd way :-D

--
Let no pain be uneased, no burden held alone.

In memory,
[img][link]
:iconliesnlove:
mmmmmmmmmm sounds like me...why do peopel find it so hard to believe that sometimes pain is good?? i like this...too much, for people not into pain it could seem twisted...and for those that are...well perhaps a cold shower could be on the menu lol

cheers

--
The road to hell is paved with good intentions...so why don't you just be bad??? :devilish:

" I can see your mouth moving but all I can hear is "blah, blah, blah, I'm a dirty tramp." - Mr Deeds :blahblah:
:iconwazooligan:
I'm surprised that I checked my account today and today is the day you posted...
And...the fact that you do enjoy pain intrigues me. This is a good thing. Maybe you'll just scare off the people you wouldn't wanna be around anyway, but intrigue the people like me? Feel free to look at my LiveJournal ([link]) I've been trying to keep it up...and I should be putting some more rambles on there today.

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"We only conserve what we love, we only love that which we understand, we only understand what we know, we only know what we are taught." --Baba Dioum
:iconliesnlove:
hmmmm i like the way you write it has a good flow to it...i will try adn check out your live journal...and rambles are good...

cheers
jesse

PS do you know of many woman who like pain???

--
The road to hell is paved with good intentions...so why don't you just be bad??? :devilish:

" I can see your mouth moving but all I can hear is "blah, blah, blah, I'm a dirty tramp." - Mr Deeds :blahblah:
:iconwazooligan:
I know a few. And yes I am a woman who likes pain...

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"We only conserve what we love, we only love that which we understand, we only understand what we know, we only know what we are taught." --Baba Dioum
:iconliesnlove:
sorry i have bad grammer...yes pain is good...i try not to think about it...but i'm a bit of a woss so it's kinda funny lol any way i look forward to checking out some more of your stuff at a later date

cheers

--
The road to hell is paved with good intentions...so why don't you just be bad??? :devilish:

" I can see your mouth moving but all I can hear is "blah, blah, blah, I'm a dirty tramp." - Mr Deeds :blahblah:

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